This is easily one of the most brilliantly conceptualized Good Omens fics that I've ever read. It's just so well-thought out, Secret Author.
I love your characterizations... Greasy and the Kracken -- as kindred spirits? Brilliant. Newt and Anathema? So nicely done-- each of them. I especially like how you write Anathema as she remembers the future... it's a nice way to address how Agnes might have done it, too.
I love it that the Wasabi comes back as a shiny red sports car. What a wonderful detail.
There are so many wonderful details, actually. Your story is just chalk full of them.
Excellent work -- thank you so much for this gift.
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I love your characterizations... Greasy and the Kracken -- as kindred spirits? Brilliant. Newt and Anathema? So nicely done-- each of them. I especially like how you write Anathema as she remembers the future... it's a nice way to address how Agnes might have done it, too.
I love it that the Wasabi comes back as a shiny red sports car. What a wonderful detail.
There are so many wonderful details, actually. Your story is just chalk full of them.
Excellent work -- thank you so much for this gift.
--Mary