cursiell_4 ([personal profile] cursiell_4) wrote in [community profile] go_exchange 2017-12-24 10:07 pm (UTC)

FANTASTIC!
Read you describe how the horsepersons came to be is delightful, the interaction between them and Eve and the tree aaaaa !!

Aziraphale and Crowley's relationship was on point you had me squealing, I mean:
" “Don’t change. Don’t ever change.”
The door slams, the bell rattling. The Bentley tears away from the curb."
OUUCHHH!! <\3

And then
"Neither of them move for a long time, and when they do, their hands end up laced together, and they don’t bother letting go."
;3; <3 <3

The sequence was great! I like death not being the first one to come around but being boss, every time he smiles is kfbskbdksnskd!
he's freaking spooky! XoX and I LOVE he preserves Adam's memory/spirit/force.

Every part of this was marvelous! Congrats!
My favorite part is when Adam Young meets Death for second time. It feels really good Its peaceful. Also love No "time rules" apply to this conversation

Also happy you included both pollution and pestilence.

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