Ah, this is really good! I hadn't expected such depth from a story self-professing itself to be about doodling. XD
I liked the take on angels/demons not being able to be creative (though it was sad, of course), and I LOVED the part about the automated telemarketer gaining sentience. Hopefully it'll think on Aziraphale's words and do something else with its life. :D And then how you tied it in to Aziraphale's predicament! Oh, and you did a great job showing Crowley's emotions with just those few lines of dialogue—he sounded so upset, the poor dear!
I especially loved this line: "Aziraphale looked down at his creation and saw that it was ridiculous, and he smiled."
Also, it's nice to see someone with proper knowledge of of HTML! Especially with the proper asterisms. :D
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Date: 2020-01-03 01:08 am (UTC)I liked the take on angels/demons not being able to be creative (though it was sad, of course), and I LOVED the part about the automated telemarketer gaining sentience. Hopefully it'll think on Aziraphale's words and do something else with its life. :D And then how you tied it in to Aziraphale's predicament! Oh, and you did a great job showing Crowley's emotions with just those few lines of dialogue—he sounded so upset, the poor dear!
I especially loved this line: "Aziraphale looked down at his creation and saw that it was ridiculous, and he smiled."
Also, it's nice to see someone with proper knowledge of of HTML! Especially with the proper asterisms. :D