I read this again the night it was posted -- and since then, I keep chuckling to myself about Gabriel's forceful holiday cheer. I don't know why that part in particular stands out for me... this entire story is full of hilarious moments.
Also, this is such a HOT tale- I love the voyeurism aspects of the story. I think you did an excellent job with that.
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Date: 2006-12-22 12:45 am (UTC)I read this again the night it was posted -- and since then, I keep chuckling to myself about Gabriel's forceful holiday cheer. I don't know why that part in particular stands out for me... this entire story is full of hilarious moments.
Also, this is such a HOT tale- I love the voyeurism aspects of the story. I think you did an excellent job with that.
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