I'm sorry for not replying earlier, between the Christmas chaos and my spotty internet I only realized my gift had been posted last night!
First of all, I cannot thank you enough for choosing my weird kinky prompt to fill. Bless you secret writer, bless you to the stars and back for that, and for writing this absolutely gorgeous fill. You said in your notes that you found the humiliation hard to write, but you pulled it off flawlessly. You put stuff in here that I don't even know how you knew I wanted. I mean, that first scene was absolutely delicious. Aziraphale is in perfect smug-bastard form and Crowley is trying so hard to counter him with snark but falling so short and it is just unf. I absolutely love the fact that this started when they were already in a relationship and that they had done some kinky stuff before, just never to this level. That context makes it so much more significant and hot.
I am a sucker for porn with plot, so I adored that post-apocalyse exposition. This: “while they couldn’t seem to make heads or tails of their separate lives, that stretch of middle ground where they overlapped seemed to make perfect sense” was beautiful, as was the comparison of Aziraphale's predictability with Crowley's insecurity and concern about holding up appearances. I loved the whole bit about Aziraphale being handy with “Crowley-shaped puzzles,” especially the redecorating aspect, because it does make sense that Crowley would want something liveable once he started actually living at his flat.
The scene with the succubus was great, I loved that little hint of mind-control and Crowley being annoyed at himself for being so weak against it. Even more than that I loved the part after he zoned out, with Aziraphale removing his sunglasses without him having noticed and taking advantage of his wrist sensitivity. So much power exchange, both subtle and blatant. The exploration part afterward, with them testing their interests and limitations, was just amazingly hot. All dat realism making my kink even better.
I love the use of a sealing circle, as well as Crowley scheming to get out of it somehow. Aziraphale's whole set up was ingeniously torturous, as was this: “There’s no sense in that. We both know you’ll give in; it’s in your nature, dear boy. Demon. Tempter. Seducer. Well, not so much the latter, I suppose, given your current position.” The aftercare was wonderful, I liked how Aziraphale rationalized Crowley's kinkiness for him, with a top shelf pun to boot.
I cannot even express how much I adore this gift. Words are gone and there is only flailing to express my sheer joy and gratefulness. I'm pretty sure this reply is weird and rambling but I don't even care because this story deserves to be rambled upon. I just. I can't even.
Thank you thank you thank you thank you
First of all, I cannot thank you enough for choosing my weird kinky prompt to fill. Bless you secret writer, bless you to the stars and back for that, and for writing this absolutely gorgeous fill. You said in your notes that you found the humiliation hard to write, but you pulled it off flawlessly. You put stuff in here that I don't even know how you knew I wanted. I mean, that first scene was absolutely delicious. Aziraphale is in perfect smug-bastard form and Crowley is trying so hard to counter him with snark but falling so short and it is just unf. I absolutely love the fact that this started when they were already in a relationship and that they had done some kinky stuff before, just never to this level. That context makes it so much more significant and hot.
I am a sucker for porn with plot, so I adored that post-apocalyse exposition. This: “while they couldn’t seem to make heads or tails of their separate lives, that stretch of middle ground where they overlapped seemed to make perfect sense” was beautiful, as was the comparison of Aziraphale's predictability with Crowley's insecurity and concern about holding up appearances. I loved the whole bit about Aziraphale being handy with “Crowley-shaped puzzles,” especially the redecorating aspect, because it does make sense that Crowley would want something liveable once he started actually living at his flat.
The scene with the succubus was great, I loved that little hint of mind-control and Crowley being annoyed at himself for being so weak against it. Even more than that I loved the part after he zoned out, with Aziraphale removing his sunglasses without him having noticed and taking advantage of his wrist sensitivity. So much power exchange, both subtle and blatant. The exploration part afterward, with them testing their interests and limitations, was just amazingly hot. All dat realism making my kink even better.
I love the use of a sealing circle, as well as Crowley scheming to get out of it somehow. Aziraphale's whole set up was ingeniously torturous, as was this: “There’s no sense in that. We both know you’ll give in; it’s in your nature, dear boy. Demon. Tempter. Seducer. Well, not so much the latter, I suppose, given your current position.” The aftercare was wonderful, I liked how Aziraphale rationalized Crowley's kinkiness for him, with a top shelf pun to boot.
I cannot even express how much I adore this gift. Words are gone and there is only flailing to express my sheer joy and gratefulness. I'm pretty sure this reply is weird and rambling but I don't even care because this story deserves to be rambled upon. I just. I can't even.
This is beautiful. That is all.