ext_21717 ([identity profile] irisbleufic.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] go_exchange 2014-12-02 03:22 am (UTC)

"Just talk to her the same way you always have. She's not an alien."

Adam looked wistfully to the skies. "Aliens aren't real, Anathema."

Anathema had another bite of Adam's mother's painstaking cake. "Why don't you go to your sister to talk about this stuff?"

Adam snorted. "You don't have siblings, do you?"


Your dialogue between Anathema and Adam is superb and right on-pitch throughout, but this one exchange in particular is flawless. I may be biased (as an individual with siblings who agrees with Adam hardcore), but it's so full of wistful insight. Lovely!

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