Sorry it took so long, but--let me know when you get the continuation onto AO3 so I can subscribe and give it kudos? (I'm hoshi_ryo there if you want to gift it to me, and that'd automatically get me notified.)

It's a very good start, and I really want to see where it goes--I'm particularly fond of your Aziraphale, and want to see more of your Crowley. (And somehow I already feel bad for those ducks and I don't know why.)