I wanted to thank you for writing this amazing story. I loved reading it. Aziraphale and Crowley are both wonderfully written, and I like how the story ties into the events of the book. The dynamic between the two is also nicely executed. The extra bits about Crowley burning his clothes after working in the field and Aziraphale only cleaning his clothes with the very best detergent are nice additions, too.
Some lines are particularly funny. Like when Crowley thought to himself, “The angel doth protest too much, methinks.” Or when Aziraphale was yelling things like “The MOON” and “SNAKES on the MOON?” Not to mention when Crowley was mentally cursing (or blessing) new math while being too drunk to remember that he was responsible for it. And the poem that Aziraphale was drunkenly reciting really made my day.
The wording of the last line is also really well done. It's very descriptive and is a nice reference to the yin yang symbol.
Overall, this is really well done, and I'm glad to have gotten such a great gift.
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I wanted to thank you for writing this amazing story. I loved reading it. Aziraphale and Crowley are both wonderfully written, and I like how the story ties into the events of the book. The dynamic between the two is also nicely executed. The extra bits about Crowley burning his clothes after working in the field and Aziraphale only cleaning his clothes with the very best detergent are nice additions, too.
Some lines are particularly funny. Like when Crowley thought to himself, “The angel doth protest too much, methinks.” Or when Aziraphale was yelling things like “The MOON” and “SNAKES on the MOON?” Not to mention when Crowley was mentally cursing (or blessing) new math while being too drunk to remember that he was responsible for it. And the poem that Aziraphale was drunkenly reciting really made my day.
The wording of the last line is also really well done. It's very descriptive and is a nice reference to the yin yang symbol.
Overall, this is really well done, and I'm glad to have gotten such a great gift.