maniacalmole ([personal profile] maniacalmole) wrote in [community profile] go_exchange 2018-01-08 01:26 am (UTC)

This is really nice and cute!

I liked the line "It was as if Tadfield had this amazing quality of taking a moment to consider all that the world could offer, and only allowing the best of it."

I especially love the descriptions of Pepper in this, from her 'eternal freckles', to her stealing sandwiches, to "Pepper remembered a summer when she’d been able to win most arguments by default by listening to both sides before fighting for one or the other."

"Dad was angry with me for something I should have done but didn’t, but, then again, I suppose all children get lectured for that kind of thing.”" This is a great way of putting it XD

The ending is so nice! Adam spreading happiness-using his power the best way he could, which was all he wanted to do :')

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