This story is charming, hilarious and sweet. It made me so happy, and I recognize that unmistakable touch. Each of your stories is a precious gift, dear author.
The whole piece is delightful, but here are some lines I especially enjoyed:
"Angel, you’re more of a Miss Marple and you know it." Touché.
“Oh, bloody heaven,” Crowley said under his breath. “Not them.” Then, in a cheery voice, he called out, “Hallo, Dukes Hastur, Ligur!" I pictured the scene so well!
"Aziraphale wondered how Hell ever accomplished anything."
"Did you know Freddie Mercury has a really nice album of Christmas song covers?”
"I suppose I could say I am impressed.” “A gift I shall cherish forever,” Aziraphale said through gritted teeth." Hahaha!
“Not Santa Claus?” NOT THIS TIME. “Ha, I was only jok—wait, what?” jhgfghhff
"The horsepersons wore the uncomfortable looks of persons who had once tried to bully someone smaller than them and failed miserably." This is so great!
In short, I loved the dialogues :D And when they sing, my god, it was so funny!
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The whole piece is delightful, but here are some lines I especially enjoyed:
"Angel, you’re more of a Miss Marple and you know it." Touché.
“Oh, bloody heaven,” Crowley said under his breath. “Not them.” Then, in a cheery voice, he called out, “Hallo, Dukes Hastur, Ligur!" I pictured the scene so well!
"Aziraphale wondered how Hell ever accomplished anything."
"Did you know Freddie Mercury has a really nice album of Christmas song covers?”
"I suppose I could say I am impressed.”
“A gift I shall cherish forever,” Aziraphale said through gritted teeth." Hahaha!
“Not Santa Claus?”
NOT THIS TIME.
“Ha, I was only jok—wait, what?” jhgfghhff
"The horsepersons wore the uncomfortable looks of persons who had once tried to bully someone smaller than them and failed miserably." This is so great!
In short, I loved the dialogues :D
And when they sing, my god, it was so funny!