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sonnet23 ([personal profile] sonnet23) wrote in [community profile] go_exchange 2019-01-04 01:38 am (UTC)

This is so great!! I loved the plot - its connection with the canon, its scale and also that rather important message that it contains; it turns out that even supernatural beings need to be more careful with non-renewable resources! And I also loved the fact that the problem was not solved by Adam (aka deus ex machina) but that the day was (at least partly) saved by Crowley's love of rare plants and Anathema's wisdom. <3 Though I would like him to interfere and save the whales and magic very much, I still think he's right.

Aziraphale and Crowley's relationship here is sooo perfect! Crowley being all sad and jealous when Aziraphale spends his time with other angels! T_T <3 And it's good that though Crowley feels forgotten and hurt, he's wrong about Aziraphale - his friend would never trade him for a legion of angels.

You killed me with that story inside the bigger story - about Snake!Crowley who had been captured and exploited him for venom-milking! T_T Poor dear...((( And he can't even forget it with all his nightmares... I'm happy he got that love therapy from Aziraphale when the angel learnt about it. Aaawww <33

I also like the way you write Anathema and Newt - they are so real and so very likeable. Oh, and Hayliel was really hilarious! :D

"his favourite tartan disaster" and "his favourite, slightly cold-blooded demon" << these two parallelled characteristics are so heartwarming! :)

Thank you, Secret Author! :)



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