maniacalmole ([personal profile] maniacalmole) wrote in [community profile] go_exchange 2020-12-22 12:29 am (UTC)

Oooh, the atmosphere of the opening scene is so vivid, and with humor mixed in too!

The WEST END. I got what the black chariot was, but I didn’t get the West End, that’s hilarious XD

“forming a strange sort of harmony that, as she closed in on it, seemed to be crooning, ‘Is this the real life?’” Love it

Love Crowley springing into action to save them from an enraged Aziraphale!

“Crowley clarified, with a grin that plainly suggested he was enjoying being the nice one, or at least Aziraphale not being the nice one, for once. “ I bet these are his favorite moments :D

‘Did a demon just lift the curse of Babel?’ asked Aziraphale, with exasperated affection.” <3<3<3

Land of Saul! I could never have guessed that one, either, but it’s so clever! As is Anathema

Oh my gosh he IS older than sin….incredible.

“On myne lyfe, Anathema, and myne afterlyfe, I am so proude of yowe.’” Oh, I’m emotional

They’re going to help the treeee!!! And TOGETHER <3

This was wonderful! I’m so glad you had the Hernez family in this :D Jaime is such a good character for his only two pages or so that he’s in it, and his family here is so rounded out and beautiful! I also love Anathema and Crowley having a chat, and your way of writing Anathema/Newt and A/C, it’s all so good :D

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