Perfect in all ways. You have an unparalleled knack for getting Gaiman's/Pratchett's voice--this sounds so canon. More I think than anything else I've read.
Crowley just takes the prize for best fanfic characterization EVAR. Everything he does and says is so him. And all his smartass remarks!! I won't even bother quoting them, 'cause they're all great.
Az v. Metatron scene = O_O I was holding my breath the whole time. It was so heartbreakingly sad, and I was positively doing a little happy dance in my chair when Az finally got a backbone and stood up to the jerk.
And then Crowley as "Invading Demon Army"...*ROTFLMAO*
Truly, I could go on forever, but lemme just say that before I read this, I devoutly disliked Whitman. Especially Leaves. I have now changed my tune. You integrated the excerpts so seamlessly, and you picked such beautiful selections. And Az using literature as a confession? HOLY CRAP, YES. Just...yes.
I love you, and this fic, with a mad love. Thank you SO much for writing this and sharing it with us. It is an amazing piece.
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Crowley just takes the prize for best fanfic characterization EVAR. Everything he does and says is so him. And all his smartass remarks!! I won't even bother quoting them, 'cause they're all great.
Az v. Metatron scene = O_O I was holding my breath the whole time. It was so heartbreakingly sad, and I was positively doing a little happy dance in my chair when Az finally got a backbone and stood up to the jerk.
And then Crowley as "Invading Demon Army"...*ROTFLMAO*
Truly, I could go on forever, but lemme just say that before I read this, I devoutly disliked Whitman. Especially Leaves. I have now changed my tune. You integrated the excerpts so seamlessly, and you picked such beautiful selections. And Az using literature as a confession? HOLY CRAP, YES. Just...yes.
I love you, and this fic, with a mad love. Thank you SO much for writing this and sharing it with us. It is an amazing piece.