OK, Secret Author, I’ve figured this out. You are actually Neil Gaiman. Or Terry Pratchett. Or both. After reading this story it’s the only explanation that makes sense. Seriously, it takes a lot to pull me out of lurkerdom to comment on a story. I’ve been reading GO fanfic for a little over a year now and this is the closest thing to the voice of the book that I’ve found. You could title this “Epilogue,” bind it along with the book and you would never even skip a beat. And on top of that, IT’S A GREAT STORY! Inventive plot and wonderful characterizations (particularly the Metatron and Beelzebub, oh yes, and Adam. I loved Adam.) You even made me want to go read Whitman. All in all, a superb job and you should be very proud.
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Seriously, it takes a lot to pull me out of lurkerdom to comment on a story. I’ve been reading GO fanfic for a little over a year now and this is the closest thing to the voice of the book that I’ve found. You could title this “Epilogue,” bind it along with the book and you would never even skip a beat.
And on top of that, IT’S A GREAT STORY! Inventive plot and wonderful characterizations (particularly the Metatron and Beelzebub, oh yes, and Adam. I loved Adam.) You even made me want to go read Whitman. All in all, a superb job and you should be very proud.