SQUEE. I absolutely ADORE how you've done Death and Adam in this piece, especially Adam's method of "rewinding" his perception. My favorite lines in absolutely all of this were Adam's "If I woke up one mornin' and Pep was in my bed, but I couldn't remember why, the first thing I'd think was that we got tired and fell asleep" and Death's "AND YOU CAN EAT THIS NOW THAT IT HAS EXPLODED, BUT YOU COULD NOT BEFORE."
"NOW THAT IT HAS EXPLODED" is going to make its way into my regular conversation JUST BECAUSE. also maybe "HOW MANY PEOPLE HAVE DIED BECAUSE OF THE CONTENTS OF THEIR NOSES."
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I absolutely ADORE how you've done Death and Adam in this piece, especially Adam's method of "rewinding" his perception. My favorite lines in absolutely all of this were Adam's "If I woke up one mornin' and Pep was in my bed, but I couldn't remember why, the first thing I'd think was that we got tired and fell asleep" and Death's "AND YOU CAN EAT THIS NOW THAT IT HAS EXPLODED, BUT YOU COULD NOT BEFORE."
"NOW THAT IT HAS EXPLODED" is going to make its way into my regular conversation JUST BECAUSE.
also maybe "HOW MANY PEOPLE HAVE DIED BECAUSE OF THE CONTENTS OF THEIR NOSES."
Thanks for the wonderful piece!