Aww thank you :D I'm really happy you enjoyed the fic so much. When I re-read Good Omens a few months back it struck me that Pollution was the most likely of the Horsepersons to go down the lyrical, poetic, artistic appreciation route.

and the toxic dust from the tombs of saints

Pollution knows how to think creatively.

And the workmen!

I do hope that the itchy, embarrassing ailments Crowley afflicted them with wore off eventually, or were at least able to be banished with the help of a qualified medical professional.