I really enjoyed the dialogue - you captured their back and forth manner so well, and it was such a delight to read.
Also, the plot was... YES. Loved it. It flowed well and you changed from one time period to the next perfectly. Also... Aziraphale!Baby talk cracked me up.
“Wait. Ahem. Begone, foul demon. There. Now, yesterday you were telling me about some odd animals you saw; care to continue?” Ah, yes. You can tell he means it. XD
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I really enjoyed the dialogue - you captured their back and forth manner so well, and it was such a delight to read.
Also, the plot was... YES. Loved it. It flowed well and you changed from one time period to the next perfectly. Also... Aziraphale!Baby talk cracked me up.
“Wait. Ahem. Begone, foul demon. There. Now, yesterday you were telling me about some odd animals you saw; care to continue?”
Ah, yes. You can tell he means it. XD
*mems*