I've been away travelling, which explains my late comment, ack!

But yes. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much, secret writer, for this fabulous, fabulous fic! It's absolutely gorgeous, and I can't decide on a favourite line because there're so many I adore. Loved the vivid, sweeping, descriptive imagery you've painted. Adored the characterisation too: it was intriguing, and certainly puts those precious glimpses of Famine and Pollution in the book in a rather interesting light.

Again, thank you very much for this poetical, thought-provoking piece!