Ahem.... well, this is certainly quite the pleasure to read!!!!!
I think you know how much I enjoy this, already. But indulge me as I tell you again.
I think you do a great job balancing humor, smut, and their characterizations. Also, I like the smut plot line -- something you said in a comment above... you wanted their first time to be rather special? Yep, this is certainly special!
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Date: 2005-12-21 05:31 pm (UTC)I think you know how much I enjoy this, already. But indulge me as I tell you again.
I think you do a great job balancing humor, smut, and their characterizations. Also, I like the smut plot line -- something you said in a comment above... you wanted their first time to be rather special? Yep, this is certainly special!
Excellent work!
xoxoMary