"“See? There you go. You just did it again. Masterful!”" Omg your CHARACTERIZATION is masterful
"before the demon managed to bring up his dropped jaw - which dropped farther than most people’s" YES
Oh no, there are too many great moments and lines for me to quote. That whole thing about Crowley's backside XD They are the best at banter and you wrote it so well! Moving the books away before they show their wings.
I can't believe I sat here confused by the 'sudden but inevitable betrayal' line for a good 10 seconds before I got it. Excellent reference :D
"Something sweet and hopeful poked out like an unrealistically cute garden creature, and then slithered back down behind the thin sardonic facade. " Oh my
"Crowley was absolutely right about how manipulative Aziraphale could be, and Aziraphale was pleased to note that Crowley played along with his eyes wide open (since he so rarely blinked). If someone’s going to have your back, they ought to know what you’ve been hiding behind it. And he did, the old serpent." This and your last sentence. So good :D
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Date: 2019-01-08 03:11 am (UTC)"before the demon managed to bring up his dropped jaw - which dropped farther than most people’s" YES
Oh no, there are too many great moments and lines for me to quote. That whole thing about Crowley's backside XD They are the best at banter and you wrote it so well! Moving the books away before they show their wings.
I can't believe I sat here confused by the 'sudden but inevitable betrayal' line for a good 10 seconds before I got it. Excellent reference :D
"Something sweet and hopeful poked out like an unrealistically cute garden creature, and then slithered back down behind the thin sardonic facade. " Oh my
"Crowley was absolutely right about how manipulative Aziraphale could be, and Aziraphale was pleased to note that Crowley played along with his eyes wide open (since he so rarely blinked). If someone’s going to have your back, they ought to know what you’ve been hiding behind it. And he did, the old serpent." This and your last sentence. So good :D