I loved it! It was funny and so well-written! I'd love to see more of Ooze's adventures on Earth. I kind of pitied him to be honest, especially when I learnt that he was so bad at being a demon! He just needs a proper angelic Adversary who would teach him to wear suits and eat sushi and let the humans do the tempting.
Also, it looks like Crowley misses him a bit too. Maybe you could write a sequel where Oozw gets a second chance? :D
My favourite parts are where Crowley is explaining the basics of the job using this brilliantly exaggerated formal language: "In order to tempt humans one has to appear neat and efficient," Crowley declared. "They do not trust one, if one looks ugly, filthy or sloppy."
And the moment where Ooze is trying to threaten the furniture. XD
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Date: 2020-12-03 06:39 pm (UTC)Also, it looks like Crowley misses him a bit too. Maybe you could write a sequel where Oozw gets a second chance? :D
My favourite parts are where Crowley is explaining the basics of the job using this brilliantly exaggerated formal language:
"In order to tempt humans one has to appear neat and efficient," Crowley declared. "They do not trust one, if one looks ugly, filthy or sloppy."
And the moment where Ooze is trying to threaten the furniture. XD
Thank you for the story!