Oh this was just perfect! I adored this! It was so visceral and i loved the contrast between light and dark, warmth and violence, it was just perfect!!!! Your use of language was excellent and portrayed all the characters exceedingly well! Damn, i hope you get that second part up and running soon cause im hooked!! SQUEE!!!!!!!!
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branchandroot
please excuse the excessive use of exclamation marks...
Date: 2006-12-28 02:28 am (UTC)