Oh dear, I loved this. I admit I was a little confused about the timeline and why, if they'd been living in London, that Crowley was frightened to go into London, even if he hadn't remembered about the end of the world. This was probably explained in the narrative and I missed it (which is likely considering I'm reading this while my mother is yelling at me about some christmas presents, the cats are yowling for food, and my dad is fighting with my mom lol).
Anyway, I did love this, they both seem in character and I love the ducks returning at the end, even if they did interupt the two. Love the dialogue between them and the hotness and everything, really. <3 <3
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Date: 2008-12-21 06:08 pm (UTC)Anyway, I did love this, they both seem in character and I love the ducks returning at the end, even if they did interupt the two. Love the dialogue between them and the hotness and everything, really. <3 <3