Why, oh why doesn’t this have more comments? This was absolutely wonderful!
Your writing style alone is to die for, it’s just descriptive enough to put images in my head, but not so verbose it turns into purple prose (good god, no) or anything. It was an extremely enjoyable read. Love, love, love how you wrote the characters and the dialogue in particular. I liked your take on Uriel, how he’s kiiind of a jerk, but not filled with Heavenly Reaeg like certain other versions of him. Behemiel was adorable as well.
In every cover they both appeared to have wardrobe malfunctions, as their chests were partially exposed.
This line right here had me laughing out loud. I really didn’t expect “wardrobe malfunctions” to turn up. One never does. It’s a bit like the Spanish Inquisition.
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Date: 2009-12-17 01:35 pm (UTC)Your writing style alone is to die for, it’s just descriptive enough to put images in my head, but not so verbose it turns into purple prose (good god, no) or anything. It was an extremely enjoyable read. Love, love, love how you wrote the characters and the dialogue in particular. I liked your take on Uriel, how he’s kiiind of a jerk, but not filled with Heavenly Reaeg like certain other versions of him. Behemiel was adorable as well.
In every cover they both appeared to have wardrobe malfunctions, as their chests were partially exposed.
This line right here had me laughing out loud. I really didn’t expect “wardrobe malfunctions” to turn up. One never does. It’s a bit like the Spanish Inquisition.